Rosie's Novel in St Ives

Rosie finally writes a novel in St Ives – live it with her!

The Novel is starting to flow now!

My St Iveian novel is really starting to flow now and the National Novel Writing Month is helping to push this along. I think I now have most of the plot worked out and I have written the final short chapter.

My morning walks in this beautiful town have been an inspiration and they help me focus on what will get written during the day. I am probably adding about 2,000 words a day and the novel is just passing the 20,000 words mark. I think it will finish up as about 65,000 words.

Here is a picture I took the other morning on one of my walks.

This is a short, rough, so there will be some typos except from the novel.

Roy drifted into life as much from the cold as the fulfilment of sleep. He pulled the duvet a little tighter and tried to return to sleep. He knew sleep could not come now. Tea was always the first part of his day. The little house was freezing as usual at this time of year. No central heating. He haltingly added layer on layer of clothing. Today he felt the desire to work and working in the cold studio meant, firstly, avoiding hypothermia. The hot tea made with two teabags, the same two bags he would use all day, laid down a layer of warmth. The bread in the bin was mouldy; that didn’t really matter so he put a single slice into the toaster. Unbuttered toast in mouth and bucket sized mug of tea in the hand, he opened the door to his rear room. The little house had belonged to Alfred Wallis fifty or more years ago but he had been left the house by his father.  It was called a house but it might as well have been a shed for the house was so small that it was hard to imagine a family living here. There were two rooms at the bottom and two rooms at the top. the toilet and primitive bath was in the cellar. The small brown front door led onto the sitting room and kitchen, this room being about ten feet by ten feet. A flight of stairs led to two more rooms ten feet by ten feet. the rearmost of these Roy used as a bedroom. The front upstairs room was a storeroom of sorts containing paints, canvases, paper, frames, ropes, lines and paraphernalia who use he had long forgotten. Some of the things he had inherited with the house and never knew what they were let alone what they were used for. The house was dark and messy the light from the windows filtered through twenty years of dirt, maybe fifty.

As Roy opened the door to the rear ground floor room, that morning in December, the light was like a 100 photographers flashes. As dark as the front room was so the rear room was bright. It was illuminated by floor to roof glass windows. Some ingenious previous owner had arranged for the last section of roof to be made of glass sections so that almost the whole room had one glass side and ceiling. This glass was cleaned once per week by a contractor, at some considerable cost. The windows faced to the North an ideal orientation for art. Roy observed that yesterday’s canvas was lying on the floor. Roy was an abstract artist and worked with the canvas directly on the floor. This allowed him to work directly over the canvas. He dominated it. Over the years he had developed long brushes so that he could paint, at least some of the canvas, standing up. At other times he worked kneeling on the floor beside the canvas and for the larger canvases the discerning eye could determine knee sized impressions and stretch marks in the canvas, despite the use of a kneeling pad. Roy was no different to  many artists in St Ives who you see walking about the town on daily errands covered in paint. The distinguishing mark for Roy Blum was that his knees were coated in old dry paint. He seldom changed his outer working clothes they consisted of an old blue smock of a think canvas material and a think pair of blue cord trousers. His working studio was also his showroom. There was a small door in the left-hand wall that opened onto Harry’s Court a small court yard with access to the main road. It was far too dangerous to open the small brown front door that led directly to the main back road.

He kept an old Chesterfield chair that had once, no doubt, resided in a grand house of Cornwall. It’s role now was far more practical but proletariatian. It supported alternately, Roy’s bottom, Roy’s palette or paint pot, Roy’s part finished work and most importantly Roy’s mug of tea when he was working on his knees. He rested his bottom on the arm of the Chesterfield and then slid into the seat. Lifting his eyes to the outside world he gazed upon Portmeor beach. Eight Hundred yards of fine grained golden sand, with a delicate glistening pattern impressed into it from the retreating sea. Roy had worked in this room for over twenty years and, he thought, had never seen the same scene from this window twice. it was as if the pulse of the retreating and advancing sea, like some perpetual engine, powered his work. And what of his work I hear you say! Abstract painting from the heart; Roy would say directly from his emotional bond with this place. For somehow, some unrevealed mechanism, drove this little colony of artists at the extreme end of this English protuberance. St Ives, Cornwall made better artists of everyone who sort out this remote colony.

Tea finish he threw open the side door and placed this little swinging sign outside in the alley. Wallis Studio Open! Not many customers stepped into the studio in December and purchasing customers were rare birds in deed. So it was that at a little after ten o’clock in the morning a smart lady wearing a black pencil skirt above the knee and 2″ purple kitten heels teamed with a purple jumper and a black Macintosh, unbuttoned, stepped over the threshold and ask, ‘Is it OK to look around?’

‘On Yes, do come in and browse,’ Roy said.

Carrying on working once he had had a glance at the newcomer. But he couldn’t ignore the woman for long.

‘It is a rare treat to find such a fair and beautiful maiden in these parts so close to Michaelmas.’

She tossed him, nonchalantly, a sexist pig look.

Not chastened he continued.

‘It is a pleasure to be stopped in my work by real beauty.’

He raised himself from kneeling to admire the woman some more. Looking at her, not with his artists eye but with his lecherous eye, he was stirred by her prim attention to her appearance. The expertly carved dark brown bob suggested money and a traveller from London. ‘If you would like to remove your clothes I’ll be ready to paint you in a moment.’

‘But you are an abstract painter I think. You have no need of models.’

‘True, true but for you I would make an exception.’

He recoiled, with hurt pride, into his chair.

‘Is there anything in particular that your were after?’

‘I need some big abstract canvases for the hotel I run. They need to have blues and seaside colours.’

‘Oh my dear. Blue is not a seaside colour for seaside you need reds and purples not blues.’

‘Do you have any large blue canvases, or should I go somewhere else.’

‘As you can see I am all out of large blue.’

‘Is your artist principle so strong  that you couldn’t paint some with blue.’

‘My artist principle drives me I do not drive it,’

‘Oh for goodness sake do you want to take my money or not?’

‘I have little need for much money. If I had some blue canvases you could have them for the price of a pint of ale and an hour in my bed.’

‘God! You ridiculous man. Do you have any more work on show that I can see. I do like the emotion of what you have here.’

‘Luckily I do have some other work on show at the moment. Pop out of here and go to the right you will find another gallery 80 yards on your left. I have a small showing of material entitled Passions of the Sea,’

She stepped out as quickly as she stepped in. Roy thought maybe out quicker than she stepped in. He chuckled to himself – paintings for sex it was just like the old days. The smile was eye to eye. Painting for food and drink in the old days, but now the only currency the Sloop took was Queens coinage. Shame, he thought. He mixed a large aquamarine blue, she’d made him think, and a new mug of tea. He’d hardly finished the mug of tea when the women was back again.

‘Did you see anything you liked? He said.’

‘The Tate doesn’t sell paintings from the exhibition they said. They sent me round to see you.’

‘I want to sleep with you now and I will have the whole exhibition when it closes in March.’

‘While I am very taken with you, you seem like my sort of woman, you’d have to sleep with me twice a day for ten years for my agent to be happy with that bargain.’

They both started to laugh, a small chuckle at first, and then both fell about laughing that filled the studio with a warm resonance.

‘If you have a hour you can buy me a pint and a pie, in that order, and we can talk about a commission.’

He closed up the studio placing the sign ‘Working in the Sloop’ on the door. They chatted about all things on the way to the Sloop and on arrival were surprised to find it closed. For the mourners of David May only!.

‘Come on, she said I am staying at the Porthminster, ‘we can get a decent drink there.’

On arrival at the grand Porthminster hotel they looked a strange couple. To the doorman they looked like a business women and a tramp. His quizzical look was soon quelled by a rather ferocious one from Madeline Albright. They sat in the main lounge looking down onto the town and the beach and she ordered, which Roy thought rare confidence for a woman, ‘a pint of HSD for my friend here and a large Sauvignon Blanc for me. Two further drinks followed and then Madeline Albright said, ‘you will need to shower if you are going to sleep with me!’

Rosie

Sorry no post yesterday! But it was a hell of a day!

I had been up early for my morning walk and got back to tea and porridge. I had a good morning writing and then went out to lunch with a new friend.

This is where it all went wrong, in that two bottles of wine later, I thought writers could drink, I could hardly stand up and before I knew my new friend and I were sitting on the beach in a shall we say,a dolophin roll, kissing and getting very hot. The sun was shining super hot yesterday. Well! I don’t think anything really happened and I won’t be seeing the new friend again as I must have embarrassed myself.

I have given up drink forever as I still felt queesy this morning.

Must concentrate on Writing.

NaNoWriMo update – I am just up above 12,000 and the plot thickens nicely

Rosie

I have written my first sex scene!

The weather in St Ives has been brilliant today. I got up early and had a nice stiff walk along the rugged coast path towards Cloggy. Then back for some writing followed by a super lunch with added golden liquid. More writing in the afternoon and I have just returned from fireworks on the beach – so romantic. Lots of big bangs!!

Today I wrote my first sex scene. I was quite proud of it; not too salacious but with plenty of orgasms.

Well here it is – be kind with me if you comment.

On arrival at the grand Porthminster hotel they looked a strange couple. To the doorman they looked like a business women and a tramp. His quizzical look was soon quelled by a rather ferocious one from Madeline Albright. They sat in the main lounge looking down onto the town and the beach and she ordered, which Roy thought rare confidence for a woman, ‘a pint of HSD for my friend here and a large Sauvignon Blanc for me. Two further drinks followed and then Madeline Albright said, ‘you will need to shower if you are going to sleep with me!’

He found it hard to swallow the last mouthful of beer, it would have been easier to spit it away. To his total and utter amazement she led him up to her suite. He stripped off and showered, thinking this doesn’t happen every day of the week. When he returned he discovered that her prim, neat exterior was mirrored on the inside of her clothes. She was thin and toned and clearly in charge of this situation. He lay beside her and laid a hand upon her midriff, gently touching the side of her face with the other. ‘I told you, you were a beauty when you came in this morning.’ In the way of artists he did not kiss her he let his hands caress all the mounds and furrows of her body and face. Finally when his fingers had intricately explored the tiny fleshes of her lips he slid his lips sideways onto hers. Then his tongue explore those same fleshes of her lip, inside and outside. Finally his fingers explored her thighs and then the fleshes of her vulva. The rough skin upon his fingers took little time to climax her, she tried to withhold her abandon but eventually one led into another until she draw a small speck of blood from her own lip. His final act while gentle and smooth was also hard, and she thought abstract like his paintings – no clear focal point. He lay beside her breathing heavily and she wondered how old he was, not old enough to be her father thank God, she thought.

MY word count on NaNOWriMo is now 10,000 one fifth of a novel – wow!

Rosie

I’ve written my heroine escape

Today I just had a short walk up the hill to Trenwith Car Park the site of an old mine that I am featuring in my novel.  It was sunny and warm so I just needed a thin top – certainly no coat. The Wheal Trenwith mine was covered by the car park some time ago but I wanted to walk around it to see how it could be explained in the book. So having walked around it I changed a few things about how it appears. I wonder if this is a Top Tip to try and explore places you write about. They do say always write about what you know and I wonder if this is what is meant.

The main point of this post is that I have placed my heroine in St Ives and found a way for her to walk away from her husband. I think you will have to wait until the book is published to find out the detail as it is involved. One issue I have with it is that the action takes place in one chapter and that chapter is now 3,281 words. I am working on the whole novel being 70,000  I was a bit worreid that this might be a bit long. I guess I can change it once I review it.

National Novel Writing Month is going well for me as I was behind in the word count but now I have caught up and I am a little ahead of the daily count. November 4th and I have 6,868 writen, about one tenth of the way through my novel and about the same through NaNoWriMo.

I’ll try and push on over the weekend so as to create some slack in the writing process.

I still don’t have a title for my novel so if anyone feels able to help please post a comment.

Rosie

Denouement substantially done!

Today was sunny at first and then we had driving rain showers. I set off around the harbour with a thin wintry sun guiding me. Today I was heading for the Knill monument up in the hills above St Ives. http://www.stivestrust.co.uk/html/knill_monument.html I made it just before the slanting, driving, freezing rain took hold. I had a cagoule with me but that was no real protection so I was wet to my undies in about two minutes. I had a refreshing and soggy walk home to the hot shower, tea and porridge.

To the detail of the day’s work. I have been searching for an involved, relatively complex but believable plot for the feud between the May family and the Thomas family. Today I found it in a contrived idea of loss and murder in the distant past. This needed some research so the words did not exactly flow onto the page but as they formed I felt the idea and its function was going to work. I sat down to this at about 9.30 and after 4 hours thought I had done enough. I thought about the difference between made up story that i can generally rattle out quite quickly and story based on some historical fact. I hope by grounding the story in a sort of reality It would mean more to the reader; especially if that reader were in St Ives.

Hot Tip for other writers! I find all the good ideas about sections of books come when I am out walking or sitting and staring. These morning walks of an hour or so give me exercise, make me a bit thinner (3 lbs since I moved to St Ives) and allow my mind to develop ideas for how the story should develop. It is particularly useful to walk and then have a writing session as the ideas are fresh in the mind. I always take a little stripy notebook with me to jot things down. But invariably the good ideas stick without note.

On the NANOWRIMO I am a little bit behind for the three day total but today’s denouement was always going to be a slow and difficult part to write. I am hoping to write some more this evening and then get ahead of the total tomorrow.

Love to you all, Rosie

A half decent first chapter

Today was rainy, windy and a bit cold  in St Ives.

I managed my early morning walk and then breakfasted on porridge and tea. Not mixed together you understand. Then I set to work on the first chapter. In which one of my subsidiary characters Tom May’s father dies and we see his burial and a surprise envelope is handed to him at the wake.

In this first chapter I have set up some characterisation and relationship information. Tom hates Peter! Tom’s father David is a very nice gentleman who was in business with Peter’s father Leonard – who is a not so nice a character.

Chapter two will introduce our main heroine and we will find out how she comes to St Ives. I am thinking I will deliberately not name her husband who she is going to walk away from in chapter two. POST A COMMENT:  if you think this is a useful device?

These two story strands will gradually converge until in the climax both strands are played to a conclusion.

I am part of the National Novel Writing Month and need to write 1666 words every day in November. Well hurray I managed 1750 today.

I still don’t have a name for the novel or a publisher so if you want to suggest anything POST A COMMENT!

Rosie

Finally I have got some words on paper!

I have finally broken my duck and stopped planning and started writing. It was a beautiful day in St Ives yesterday but I managed to get off the beach – yes I was sat on the beach in a thin top for some of the day – and started writing.

The novel has moved on a bit and I have added a few more elements to the story line. Notably I have a dual story line running two St Ives protagonists that hate each other and our heroine new to St Ives. I am hoping that this will allow for more interest and a conversion of the two story lines as the novel progresses.

I have also signed up for the National Novel Writing Month which, if I am to succeed requires me to write 1666 words per day. It sounds easy but turns out to be quite hard. You can view the website here: http://www.nanowrimo.org/

This is just a short post as I need to get back to the writing.

Rosie

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It’s a blustery rainy day in Cornwall

I wake early and look out it’s windy and rainy. But not so rainy that I cannot keep my resolution to walk every day. So normal tea and then out into the bracing sea air. As I turn the corner onto the harbour I have to jump back for the road sweeper – he looks half asleep. But I escape with my life. It is only drizzling so I head out to the next bay – Carbis Bay. This is only a mile or so away so I should be able to get back if it starts raining too hard.

Its only a few days and I feel fitter and lighter. I cannot really tell if I am lighter as I don’t have any scales. I did try the fish scales on the harbour the other day but surely I cannot have been that heavy. I must look really fat because one of the fisherman shouted over to ‘get off those you’ll break them’ I don’t think he was joking!  Mental note to get a set of scales.

In just a few minutes I am round the harbour and down the tiny lane and walking beside Porthminster beach. In the far distance by the light house there is a very slim line of red – day is dawning! At the end of the beach there is a steep path out of St Ives and onwards to Carbis Bay, I stride up this without stopping. To me its seems to be easier and I am less out of breath than just a few days ago.

At the top of the rise I stop to look back on my new place of residence!

I still cannot believe how lucky I have been and how my dream is under way. As I turn to walk on the rain stiffens! The little town is now almost obliterated from view and I am getting very wet. It time to head for home! I get back to the flat about 15 minutes later and I just lose my boots and stand in the bath to drain. The little plug was in and  about half a gallon of water drained off me. Nothing for it I strip off standing in the bath. ‘This is some dream’!

After a warming shower and some clean and dry clothes I breakfast on porridge and tea.

My mind turns to the novel – that still has no name! What is is about and what possible titles could it have. “Stop worrying about the title you will probably never get it finished” my mind intervenes. But I wont be bullied by my own mind so I return to the title. The book is about walking away to a new life, in St Ives  - titles titles? The old song title come to mind ‘Walking Back to Happiness’ but no this is way too twee. How about ‘Salvation in a Coastal Town’ – no good. The sea is so blue here maybe ‘My Blue Saviour’, no my nose wrinkles, no that won’t do. ‘My Life’  nose wrinkles again but maybe that would do as a working title. Yes I like that! For now!

The next area troubling me is the story! What’s the story; how does it progress; where does it start; where does it finish!

I spend the rest of the day working on this; writing scene headings, changing them and ordering them. I spend about 5 hours on this and drink nine mugs of tea.

I am drained! This dream seems such hard work! I head out to the bar on the harbour front. Well earned drink I reason!

Getting down to writing

Day three dawns and I am again up with the larks. St Ives is dark and I am out and about with my camera snapping away as this little seaside town comes to life. I see the dawn and the sun rise in the Eastern sky! I am snapping away at every angle to every beach and harbour and the photo count is mounting.

However the novel,after the first inch, has not progressed. How can I have writers block after one day. The locals are beginning to know me as the mad early riser with the waterproof jacket and the camera. I wanted to be known as the writer. Still there is time! I have one scene for my book and not much else. I carry on walking for an hour and twenty minutes and work out that I have burnt 308 calories. Now, I just need to resist the bacon roll that I can smell from my local cafe as I get near to home.

I make it home my tummy entirely empty! That was a close shave! I breakfast on a Dukan Oatmeal and Oat bran porridge with Splender and a small Cox apple. Now to the writing! I grab my folding chair and head down to the harbour beach where I set up my chair and stare at the harbour life. the boats bob, the children scream, the parents fume and the dogs gambol about. It takes about an hour of this sitting and staring before my mind turns to the novel.

Novels in my mind are about two things structure (plot) and narrative (people and actions). I had one scene about reflection and leaving but I don’t now how my heroine got here or where she is going. My thoughts circle like vultures around my brain. Very gradually I am able to write some small pieces of the whole heroines journey. Its a hot day in October! Really this place is unique I am sat on a beach in a flimsy top and jeans on the 26th October 2011. My novel is oh so slowly growing like a culture on an agar plate. By the end of the harbour session, three and a half hours later, I have sketched out five elements. I need a drink and a strong one at that! I put my notes and the chair back in the flat and circle the harbour for that drink. I find a super little bar overlooking the harbour and get a large glass of Sauvignon Blanc. ‘That’s £6.50 please’! Horror how many royalties is that from my novel? Each book £6.99 – my royalty 8% – this glass of wine requires me to sell 11.62 books. Despite the beautiful scene of the blue, blue water in the harbour outside my heart sinks!

Rosie, signing off for another day.

This is the little town where I Now live!

This is one of the photos I have taken for this super little town!

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